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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Indulgence Children ask me, Why I am always smiling. Friends ask me, Don't I have down times. And I say I say when I play with you, When I am chatting with you, I do sincerely happy Yet when I am alone, My childhood friend comes Leaving me a scream, When I see my reflection in mirror. The person in me drive me nuts. She takes away my will. She steals away my soul. She pulls me into indulgence. My integrity got eaten up. And I I use poetry as my confession. I can't let my faults left unspoken. I tell everyone what I fool I am. Yet to my surprise, They say Beautiful, Please take a step back, And see yourself for real. You're smart and kind. Yet my heart says I am selfish. Born like Garfield, Love eating and sleep. Done nothing productive, A burden to family. Mirror, If tonight you were to visit me, Please tell why I am here. (c)Aug 29, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Your'e here to live your life with confidence. I enjoyed the read although it was rather pessimistic. Maggie |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sometimes we just don't have all of the answers right away. Don't fight it. Go with the flow. God know what he's doing. Love Joyce |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
I know what you mean about writing being a way to express that darker side of ourselves. It's a great outlet - Don't lose it!  |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Hey Eliza this was sad and moving- your beauty shows through in your writing, I believe! so keep your chin up and your pen in hand!  Connie. xx |
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