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He who talks to the dead
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since 2003-07-08
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Newport, United Kingdom

0 posted 2003-08-28 08:57 PM



The road I have travelled,
To bring me here,
Was paved with souls,
And lined with fear.

Sights and sensatations,
That noone should see,
Given a warped view,
Of that man that is me.

Destruction is rife,
Both inside and out,
A world filled with terror,
Where souls scream and shout.

Vandalised hopes,
Discarded dreams,
Where all wear a mask,
And nothing's what it seems.

Where do I go to,
When life gets me down,
When I've reached the bottom,
And all I do is frown?

Sight without seeing,
Hear without hearing,
Feel without feeling,
I'm a ghost out of time.

I Think of a sweet face,
Etched upon my mind,
The emptiness filled,
I am no longer blind.

This one is a little abstract to my mind but I hope you enjoy it all the same.

© Copyright 2003 Paul Anthony Grycuik - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-29 12:39 PM


Very niceely done however.  I am sure there are many who feel as this poem indicates with all of the horror in the orld.  Love, Joyce
cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

2 posted 2003-09-06 04:14 PM


I have put this theme into a few of my poems, in a different way to you. A very good write. Maggie
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