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junemac
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0 posted 2003-08-25 03:47 PM



Time calls
Twisting and turning
Thrusting, rocking
Dragging and churning
Moments passing
Tomorrow in today
Assertively stressing
There is no delay

Future becomes shadow
Fading behind
Emotional passions
Tapering in unwind
Beauty of now
Unique in each breath
fleeing to memory
On the way to its death

Open your eyes
Embrace times carressings
For tomorrow is today
All moments
Are your blessings




[This message has been edited by junemac (08-26-2003 03:32 AM).]

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eor
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1 posted 2003-08-25 09:29 PM


nice write, like the flow, fast, furious, nice indeed

"There never was a genius without a tincture of madness."

junemac
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2 posted 2003-08-26 04:51 PM


thank you for taking time to read and comment on this ( i havent posted in such a long time and its nice to have a positive comment )


i am glad you enjoyed it.

hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxxx

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3 posted 2003-08-29 12:25 PM


Concisely accurate, the passing of time.  Joyce
junemac
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4 posted 2003-08-31 05:58 PM


thanks joyce, just feeling a bit sad that time passes soquickly lol
hugs june x

gringakiwi
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5 posted 2003-08-31 08:21 PM


You couldn't have put this better! (I often feel the same) time flies!...
junemac
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6 posted 2003-09-01 05:29 PM


thanks for that joyce :0)

we need to enjoy each moment thoroughly before its lost. i do sometimes feel that acutely.

hugs june x

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