navwin » Archives » Corner Pub #2 » Chat With My Moon Tonight
Corner Pub #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic Chat With My Moon Tonight Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-08-19 06:44 PM


Chat With My Moon Tonight

Sometimes I search for the sky
To find the gorgeous moon.
I say where the stars are.
Moon says stars are at horizon.

Sometimes I sesarch for the sky
To find benign moonshine smile.
I say where the stars are.
Moon says stars are spreaded far apart.

In the galaxy,
One star death
Signal another birth.
Miracle of stars
Continue to show.
Long journey
Yet finally,
Stars one day will
Meet its end of history,
Leaving marks in
Human discovery
Long after they evaporate,
Into thin air.

Sometimes I ask the sky
Where is the gorgeous moon
Who always answers my questions.
Moon says she observes me from a far.

Sometimes I ask the sky
Where is benign moonshine smile
Which guides me to find my stars.
Moon says she was asleep.

(c)Aug 19, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Trillium
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
1 posted 2003-08-20 03:32 PM


Eliza:  I like this!  We all ask questions of the moon I guess.  She looks as if she is very wise!

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2003-08-20 07:24 PM


Eliza~
I've been waiting all day for this one to post~
It's GORGEOUS !

You are so very talented my friend~
And ... write the moon ... you've got my rapt attention~

Lovely, lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
3 posted 2003-08-20 07:49 PM


Thanks Marge, I'm just sharing your shines

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Corner Pub #2 » Chat With My Moon Tonight

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary