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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-19 11:44 AM



Sometimes ....
~*Marge Tindal*~

Sometimes I awaken
to watch you still sleeping
a gentle smile playing across your face
Inside my heart I am praying
that your smiles are of me
Then you stir ...
reach out and touch me
awakening, you murmur
"I have a dream to share with you"~


Your smile tells me everything I need to know~


*For my sweetheart*
August 2003






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (08-19-2003 03:23 PM).]

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Larry C
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1 posted 2003-08-19 12:07 PM


Marge,
Now you've gone and touched my heart. What a gentle picture you paint. Thank you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-08-19 01:01 PM


Larry~
Thank you ... gentle are two hearts, beating as one~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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3 posted 2003-08-19 03:29 PM


Dear Marge:  Such a lovely, tender write!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-08-19 07:22 PM


Oooh.... Im jealous.  Wonderful words for a wonderful thing.

"The usefulness of a cup is in its emptiness, for a cup that is full can hold no more."
-Roy Suenaka

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5 posted 2003-08-21 08:05 AM




a tender loving piece dear friend...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Joyce Johnson
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6 posted 2003-08-21 11:37 AM


How fortunate, the two of you.  Love, Joyce
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7 posted 2003-08-24 06:17 AM


"I have a dream to share with you"~

This truly is sharing a life. I know what you mean.

Thanks, Melton

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8 posted 2003-08-25 01:52 AM


sighs, lovely moment captured marge
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9 posted 2003-08-25 04:12 PM


Hello marge,
i really missed being around here but the one thing that always drew me back was your wonderful words. once again thanks for bringing a smile to my face.

hugs june x

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10 posted 2003-08-25 08:09 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments on this little piece~

And ... June ... GOOD to see you back~
*Huglets* to all~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2003-08-25 08:12 PM


Love looks beautiful on you dear friend. I've been inside this poem and yes, it feels wonderful doesn't it?
magic_612
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12 posted 2003-08-26 10:55 PM


I loved this poem! I also have felt this way, it is such an amazing feeling to wake up to the person you love smiling up at you. Great job
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13 posted 2003-08-27 11:10 PM


Marge...A tender write, enjoyed very much...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2003-09-04 11:12 AM


Thanks everyone~
And Hootie ... your reply is beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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15 posted 2003-09-04 07:27 PM


Marge:
This is so lovely, and it makes me look forward to finding someone special as you have. Beautifully written as always! (where's the photo of your sweetheart to accompany this!!?)
Connie.

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16 posted 2003-09-07 10:41 AM


***SIGHS**

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

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