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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-13 04:43 PM



In Willows Whisper
~*Marge Tindal*~

Among the willows whisper
sometimes a joy is found
clinging to the weeping branches
that gently sweep the ground
breathing across a heartfelt sigh
building poetic thoughts a nest
for tiny words that fly~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-08-13 05:36 PM


You know I love ALL your poems, but this one is exceptional and I've read it and reread it several times!

It touched deep in my soul.
Hugs and luvs dear friend ... Marti

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2 posted 2003-08-13 06:08 PM


Dear Marge:  I love this!  Strangely enough.........or maybe not..........I was getting ready to post one here called
"Spirit of the Willow".  I don't think it can stand competition from this one, so I'll wait!!

Love
Betty Lou

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Betty
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3 posted 2003-08-13 06:59 PM


This is very nice Marge. I read it & read it again. I really like it.
Love ya,
Betty

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-08-13 07:03 PM


Marge...I was just about to reply when my daugter said, "Wait Mom, scroll back up there."  She had read the last line of your verse (a beauty, by the way) and wanted to read the entire poem.  I asked if I should read it to her...she said no.  She wanted to savor it for herself.

You rock, woman!

Patricia

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5 posted 2003-08-14 04:02 AM


how you see the world is incredibly beautiful
Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-08-14 12:38 PM


Incredibly beautiful
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7 posted 2003-08-14 07:45 PM


Lovely words indeed.  Joyce
Suetang
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8 posted 2003-08-14 10:52 PM


So very beautiful Marge, thank you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-08-15 10:00 AM


My sincerest thanks to each of you for your comments on this little piece of heartfelt flutter~

MartiSweetie~
That you would like it that much tells me it was meant to be written~

BettyLou~
Now ... YOU have NO COMPETITION lady poetess~
Post your piece ... I'd LOVE to see it and you know it~

Betts~
Thank you ALWAYS sweetie ... now when can I expect that 'first post' from you ????

Patricia~
Your reply gave me a smile that I will wear all day.
When my writing is enjoyed by the youth of our world ... that's a great BIG reason for me to smile~

SweetDixieDoodle~
You are such a sweetheart.
Thank you for a supreme compliment~

Aenimal~
To have you drop in on a write of mine is a special treat ... thank you so much~

Joyce~
As always ... I so appreciate your sweet replies~

SueTang~
Thank you dear friend for dropping in~
I appreciate knowing that I can share with you half a world away~

*Huglets* to all my dearest friends in this special corner of the forums~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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10 posted 2003-08-24 05:26 AM


This is sooo sweet.....Marge you alwayz say sooo much in so few words.  Enjoyed this as alwayz.  
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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