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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189
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Just a lost soul, in the labyrinth of your mind, looking for the answers when you know they're hard to find. Feeling so alone, you know that you can have it too, being what you want to be, wanting to be you. Talking to the silence that surrounds you once again, Solitude and loneliness falling like the rain, breathing in the clouds of yet another empty dream, in my mind I hear your cries, as your ink on paper screams. It seems a thousand nights have passed and still I want to hear the lies, the truth is sore I can't escape no matter how I try, we live to act and act to live, this we know is true, In my hands I hold the words, where I once was holding you. I know that you are leaving me amongst all this confusion, leaving me with hidden thoughts, images, illusions. The beauty of the verses that were written in such vain, you may be gone, but don't forget, the poetry remains. [This message has been edited by gringakiwi (08-08-2003 04:04 AM).] |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I liked this. something always remains when people leave for one reason or another. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very well done and it is good to know that the poetry remains. Love, Joyce |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
 Eliza Simmons |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Connie~ *applause* So poignantly rendered~ 'In my hands I hold the words, where I once was holding you' Oh my ... needed tissues by the time I got to this line~  Lovely dear poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This was a poignant read and very well done. The emotions came through in every line and it was very moving. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
This was my first time reading any of your poems, but I promise it won't be the last. I really felt the flow was great and enjoyed the poem...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
 Thanks so much everyone for taking the time to read my poem, and for your kind words. I am really enjoying PIP! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Written with true feeling. Thanks for the read. Maggie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
In my hands I hold the words, where I once was holding you. you may be gone, but don't forget, the poetry remains. A great write!  fate is not just |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
very good indeed i enjoyed the easy flow of this and the truth within. well written and thoroughly enjoyed hugs june x |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Emotions set free. Thanks. Melton |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I really loved this. Susan |
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