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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-06 10:59 PM


Crying in the Moon Reflection

If this earth
Only had one cure existed,
If we both
Suffer from the same disease,
I know you wouldn't give it to me.
Cause in your mind I was never your lover,
Cause in your mind I was just a passing by.

Crying in the moon's reflection tonight,
I reach out for the figure whose tears I touched,
So much calmer now,
Yet loneliness keeps me awake.

If this earth
Only had one cure existed,
If we both
Suffer from the same disease,
I know you wouldn't cure me.
Cause in your mind I was never your lover,
Cause in your mind she was only on your mind.

Crying in the moon's reflection tonight,
I reach out for the figure whose tears I touched,
So much calmer now,
Yet loneliness keeps me awake.

If this earth
Only had one cure existed,
If we both
Suffer from the same disease,
I know I would kill myself for you.
Cause I know you wouldn't give the cure to me.
Cause in your mind I was never alive.

Crying in the moon's reflection tonight,
I reach out for the figure whose tears I touched,
So much calmer now,
Yet loneliness keeps me awake.

Crying in the moon's reflection tonight.
Crying in the moon's reflection tonight.
(Methinking)
My star, wherever you're
May moon shines on you.

(c)Aug 6, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-07-2003 04:20 PM).]

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DawnG
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1 posted 2003-08-06 11:54 PM


Eliza,

This is a beautiful song.

                               Dawn

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2003-08-07 12:01 PM


Thanks Dawn I'm glad you like it

It is nice to hear from you.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-08-07 01:09 AM


Very well done Eliza.  Joyce
aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 2003-08-07 02:04 PM


Thanks Joyce. It is always nice to hear your comment

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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