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PointlesS Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 21Oconomowoc, Wisconsin |
Bubbles that go, collide, and die Rock that I sit and feel so high Fish that splash and try to fight Water that flows and looks so white Bird that flys and catches his prey Trees that grow and seem to sway Sounds that blend and sound so loud Blue is the sky, there are no clouds Friends that join and watch the show Bugs that float and try to glow Sun that chases the darkness away This sight is free, no need to pay There's so many things I can not tell Beauty is something you can't describe well No picture no video won't do too much You have to be there, you need to touch You can't take it home, but it's always there It's so spectacular, but no one cares You will not believe what you have seen It's all so fresh, it leaves you clean I urge you all to go see it now I can't describe, I don't know how This poem I've written is the best I could do For a waterfall is best seen in first person view |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a really pretty poem. I have never seen a real waterfall, they do sound beautiful. Dawn |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So nice, and I agree I wouldn't get the true joy by hearing about it... I would love to see for myself. It must be beautiful!!!!!   SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is truly an apt description and you left me guessing until the end. Well done. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (08-06-2003 08:22 PM).] |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
anyone feel like a swim now? I'm all inspired! thanks for painting a picture that makes me want to jump into! |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
One of my most favourite sounds is the tinkling of water. So cooling. Maggie |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
The second stanze is my favorite. Yes, no one can utter the beauty of nature. You write this well. Thank you for sharing "There's so many things I can not tell Beauty is something you can't describe well No picture no video won't do too much You have to be there, you need to touch You can't take it home, but it's always there It's so spectacular, but no one cares You will not believe what you have seen It's all so fresh, it leaves you clean I urge you all to go see it now I can't describe, I don't know how This poem I've written is the best I could do For a waterfall is best seen in first person view" Eliza Simmons |
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