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SharaRose
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0 posted 2003-08-04 01:10 PM



I sit here wanting to write....
But I've written about just about everything.
I've written about the weather.
And hearts that have been torn, and tethered.

Times of old, and hearts of Gold.
And ones not so nice at all.
Of hearts that were evil untold,
And nature’s trees so tall.

I've written about honeybees
Not to mention some of the seven seas
Of love, and trust, and all the fuss
That love can bring.

Of April showers,
And people in their ivory towers,
Of dew kist’ pik't flowers that a lover brings.
And songs love birds sing!

Faeries, and dragons,
And things that go bump in the night.
Historic horse drawn wagons.
Eagles that soar so high in flight.

Of things be strong,
And how someone has done someone wrong.
Words about the spirit, how it transcends.
Hues, and color, and how they prism bend.

Things of fads, and grads, and dads.
Thread of spools, fools, and love duals.
Stars that shine so bright.
And people who can hurt ones who bring the light.

Can't forget about hands
And ring wraith bands
Ones of the Lorded kind.

Of wants, and desires, things so dire
Things that can drive you insane.
Questions of how we can be so blind?
Things that are a brain drain.

Men, and their thoughts,
Of the one that got away
From a story I had heard one day.
Answers sought, and lessons taught.

Hummingbirds, and butterflies,
Taboos, and inner spies.
Country, and patriots who fight.
And, damsels who needed their knight.

Of history, and planes, and trains
of civilizations long past.
Seasons that have come, and gone
Of sipping iced tea on the cool evening lawn.

I've written about baby’s giggles,
puppies, and kittens
How jello wiggles,
And with world travels I am smitten.

Flags, and from where they hail.
Spring, summer, winter, and fall.
Of ships when they set sail.
I have written about them all.

I have written all sorts of dribble.
Save ones of Queens, and Kings.
These are just a few of the things I've scribbled,
I wish my writing would take wings.

But,
What now?
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*This was written in response to Cusicks "Blockage."I know it's long, but I tried to shorten it. And since I wrote this a week ago, I have written more. I took a little bit winged flight I think.* Thaanks for putting up with the length if you got this far... )

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
Magia_negra
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1 posted 2003-08-04 04:37 PM


I like it! And there's nothing wrong with the length... I personally enjoy long poems when they make sense and make me feel something.

...somos los locos para siempre
para siempre te amo
   mi vida...

[This message has been edited by Magia_negra (08-04-2003 04:38 PM).]

Trillium
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2 posted 2003-08-04 05:59 PM


Shara Rose:  New ideas will come to you I'm sure!  Inspiration takes it's own time!

Betty Lou Hebert

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-08-04 06:13 PM


Hello...

Magia_Negra-- Thank you for the kind words. Sweet of you to say.

Betty Lou...I have written about 3 since. Sometimes I get to that point when I think I am blocked. I just hate it when that happens.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2003-08-04 07:13 PM


You've been busy but there'll be more.  Anyone who writes about all those things will find more to write about.  Keep them coming.  Joyce
SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-08-05 08:56 AM


Thank you Joyce. It's much appreciated. Bless ya!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

2dalimit
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6 posted 2003-08-05 09:54 AM


I read every word and am waiting to read more of your thoughts.

Thanks,
Melton

SharaRose
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7 posted 2003-08-05 01:27 PM


Awww thanks Melton...What a sweet thing to do. You are much appreciated for this gesture. I'm feeling pretty down right now... Really thanks for this. Bless ya a bunch!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

pegasus111
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8 posted 2003-08-05 08:15 PM


been blocked for several months. just coming out of it now. Its time for a conversation with Adverse, my muse...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



SharaRose
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9 posted 2003-08-05 10:04 PM


I wish someone would tell me about muse. I looked it up...that's how much I don't know about it. It was interesting the 9 muses were Zues's daughers. That, and lot's more I found out. I'm glad you know yours, and can talk to them. Meditate, and contemplate is what I need to do. Thanks for stirring my interest to seek the knowledge.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

DawnG
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10 posted 2003-08-05 11:18 PM


Maybe you can write your next poem about what you learned about Muses. I enjoyed this one very much.

                          Dawn

SharaRose
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11 posted 2003-08-06 12:59 PM


Thank you Dawn...that's a good idea. I will sure give that some thought. Bless ya for the read, and comment.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

cusick
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12 posted 2003-08-06 01:29 PM


Shararose I have just gone through a blockage and thought that I would never write again but with the poem you have just posted I don't think that you have anything to worry about. Maggie
SharaRose
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13 posted 2003-08-06 04:31 PM


Thanks Cusick...I appreciate this. Nice of you to stop, and comment. Bless ya! Smile

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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