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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-01 05:22 PM


Evading

I'm free
From the world.
This breath of air
May be brief,
Yet I cherish this moment,
In God's grace.

I'm free
From the world.
Time may be fleeing
With my age,
Yet I cherish this moment
In family's arms.

I'm free
From the world.
As much as I want to flee,
Someday I,
I need to face the world,
In God's time.

I'm free
From the world.
As sand is falling through the tube,
My mind is evading,
Yet someday,
Time will march up with me.

Note: Inspire by end of midterm and 1st project. I feel so free, feel like no responsibility is hanging on me.

(c)Aug 1, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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Member Patricius
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1 posted 2003-08-02 12:53 PM


Eliza:  Sounds as if you are already enjoying your time off! Have fun!

Betty Lou Hebert

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2003-08-02 01:01 PM


Well done.  Lovely to be free to enjoy life and with time to appreciate your blessings.  Love, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (08-04-2003 07:04 PM).]

cusick
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3 posted 2003-08-03 09:00 AM


Fly free and enjoy every moment. Maggie
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-08-03 09:23 AM


Eliza~
Hi gal ... now that mid-terms are done ... you can breathe a poetic *sigh* of relief~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2003-08-03 01:09 PM


Enjoy your freedom while you can, it is often fleeting and just too short


pegasus111
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6 posted 2003-08-04 07:31 AM


I remember thses times well. thanks for the memories.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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