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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-08-01 04:54 PM



Velvet Sound
~*Marge Tindal*~

Oh, to touch that velvet sound
that the curtain of night
softly brings down
To feel the surreal of velveteen sky
with starlight and moonbeams passing by~

To know the glow of a magical sky
as twi-of-night executes a soft, soft sigh
Knowing that somewhere else in this world
another shares this oystered pearl~

All of this ... and so very much more
awaits this side of Heaven's door
As poets pen the soft, soft light
of day-in-surrender ... to the oncome-of-night~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2003-08-01 05:06 PM


What a tender softness and peace this leaves... beautiful work! *S*
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2 posted 2003-08-01 05:10 PM


Lovely serene feel to this one Marge..
Very nicely penned with a beautiful pic.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Betty
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3 posted 2003-08-01 05:33 PM


Your words are so lovely with this awesome picture.
Betty

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4 posted 2003-08-01 05:47 PM


Marge  
A delight to read.

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-08-01 05:50 PM


'Tis smooth as velvet, Ms. Marge.  So much enjoyed this late afternoon.

Patricia

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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-08-01 06:50 PM


So pretty...ahhhh like a lullaby to rock you to sleepy land...soooo very pretty!!!!

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Martie
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7 posted 2003-08-01 07:04 PM


Marge/sis...So very beautiful!  
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2003-08-01 07:24 PM



Simply beautiful, Marge.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

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~Emily Dickinson

Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2003-08-01 11:49 PM


Marge...Enjoyed very much the softness of your words and the beautiful sunset...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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10 posted 2003-08-02 12:48 PM


Dear Marge:  This holds the enchantment of the evening and the beauty that surrounds us at that time of the day.  Lovely!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2003-08-02 01:00 PM


Lovely, romantical writings.  Love, Joyce
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