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BrokenWingedAngel
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0 posted 2003-07-28 01:01 PM



I wasn't there this time,
But you still said goodbye
Never to see anyone of us again
Just to fly so far so away

And yet, we'll sit here wondering
What we could've done
To change your mind
Or the actions that you've tooken

Always,the answer comes back nothing
Unless...someone had been there
The knot to cut while you hung
That'd mean we still had cares

We didn't want you to die.
Yet, you took that decision
And let everything else go
While hanging in the air

I try now, my thoughts
To put into some rhyme,
but it changes nothing...
Still I hurt...and still

You're gone.  I can't make
A poem out of that.
Here, then no longer existing..
Perhaps someday, but now...no.

Now, I'll hurt,
and you'll fly free
Perhaps this is how
It's suppose to be...

~~~In Memory of Charlie, died..... 6(?) hours ago..~~

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

© Copyright 2003 Nicole Lampert - All Rights Reserved
BrokenWingedAngel
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since 2003-02-28
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1 posted 2003-07-28 01:04 PM


I'll be the first to admit, not my most flattering poem after a death, but given my ((drunk)) condition at the moment, I hope you all forgive my ......  not so poeticness mood :p.

Take care.

A heavy hearted me,
BWA

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-07-28 01:39 PM


So sorry for the loss. This feeling I have feels awful. Oh my God. I wish there was something I could do for you. I am so sorry this has happened. I feel a very sick feeling inside. If you don't mind could I ask for prayer for you, and all concerned in his life? I don't want to do that without asking. Would you mind? Please let me know. I just feel I should be asking for prayer, and praying myself. Please do let me know.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

2dalimit
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3 posted 2003-07-28 03:44 PM


May God be with you in these trying times.

Melton

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Member Patricius
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4 posted 2003-07-28 06:39 PM


BWA:  How tragic and I'm so sorry for what you are going through.

Betty Lou Hebert

Solstice Son
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5 posted 2003-07-28 07:06 PM


oh angel.....

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pegasus111
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6 posted 2003-07-29 09:27 AM


my prayers are with you dear angel

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-07-29 08:57 PM


I am so sorry.  We've all been touched by a useless death.  Joyce
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