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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
I showed you me tonight Layed her out bare No frills, no smiles, no lies Do you still care? Hesitant, she stepped up Opened the darker soul A part no one sees Once again, to play the fool And now I'll wait, I think For the distance to form Tears still build up A never ending storm I know you wanted to know So I showed you all I could Waiting to be cut down Like so many trees in the woods There was a once upon a time Childish hope burned bright But it was replaced long ago By the barest flicker of light Now everything's laid on the line Nightmares, fears, dreams, hates Will the hope be fed more fuel? Or is it once again, "too litte, too late".... I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. [This message has been edited by BrokenWingedAngel (07-24-2003 01:00 AM).] |
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missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
It's so hard to open oursleves up to people sometime, I guess for the fear of rejection. I have a bad habit of always trying to protect myself. Maybe not always a good thing. Your poem got me thinking, I really enjoyed it. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
...Now everything's laid on the line Nightmares, fears, dreams, hates... This is the honest thing to do. Now, let the chips fall. Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (07-24-2003 06:02 PM).] |
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He who talks to the dead Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 30Newport, United Kingdom |
Hope is never dead while we breath, I hope the answers were what you needed Bunny. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Been there, and haven't we all at one time, or another, but I found out in times past there are some things that people *already* have notions, or thoughts, and it takes moving a mountain, or a miracle of God to remove that IDEA they have. Sometimes no matter what, people aren't open to listen, because of that one opinion they won't let go of. Like 2dalimit said...you did the right thing..After that it's all prayer. My heart goes out to you. I hope all turns out well. If my making these long comments are bothering all of you.. would someone let me know, and I will stop. I just can't seem to stop saying what comes to mind, and rings out in my heart. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
let the words fly SharaRose. that's what we're here for. Angel, there is nothing else to do. Be yourself and perhaps, be more selective? best wishes from an admirer...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Nicole, I really enjoyed this and if there is truth to it, I hope it turns out well. Susan C. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
deeeeeeeeeeeep sighs. you write the bestest stuff hun..... - bows low in homage - " and I dream of her always, |
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SweetSerenity Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 52Canada |
I thought this poem was extremely beautiful. As someone said already, we have all been through this. Amazing job. ~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~ |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
If you are in fact writing a true story account, you have a lot of courage that you have shown here. I am trying the online dating thing again and have been e mailing with someone for about 2 or 3 days now. As of right now we are getting along fine and having a lot in common, but he doesn't know I'm disabled yet. We'll see what happens when that issue comes up. Dawn |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nicole~ Amazing how softly across a heart a 'BrokenWingedAngel' can fly~  Lovely emotions penned here~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sometimes we are rebuffed when we are honest and open. but it pays in the long run. Joyce |
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