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IcyFlamez89
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since 2003-02-14
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0 posted 2003-07-18 06:18 PM


Oh beautiful maiden of the night
Descend from your silver throne so I may gaze into your eyes.
Perfect and soft, a mirror to your heart.
Delightfully cold and lustfully void.
How I fall entranced to every cruel beat.
Your skin glowing soft and sweet.
Caress me dearest Luna in velvet black,
Keep me deep inside so I may fill my emptiness with your abyss.
Fill me empty.

How I wish I could be that blackened mist that swirls around you in joyful dance.
How i wish I was a humble star resting in your deep night.
Oh, dearest Luna, do not wane.
Do not fear the blaze of Sun, but shine in fullest triumph.
Lift me up and twirl me like a wispy petal into your palace.

Oh fair Luna, how can you gaze at me so closely and yet be so very far away?
So very secretive you are, hiding in the corners of my dream.
But pity me Luna.
You will still shimmer for the ages while I fade.
You will still sit high in your throne while I sit with Echo.
But one day I'll meet you Luna, and one day I will shine with you.
Till then, soft goddess, play with me in the corner of my dreams.

© Copyright 2003 George Salazar - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-07-19 01:58 PM


Sounds as though you're under her spell.  Intrigueing.  Joyce
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-07-20 02:42 PM


Very pretty, enchanting feel about this. Loved it!

Thanks,
SharaRose @-->--

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pegasus111
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3 posted 2003-07-20 05:06 PM


I really like this style. Many of the pieces I write are along the same vein. very nice read my friend.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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