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Alnilam
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0 posted 2003-07-15 09:12 PM


A Dream
I had a dream last night
Where everything was nice
You actually smile when in my sight
You didn't stare as cold as ice

I had the most amazing dream
I hugged you like I've wanted to
And things were great, or so it seemed
Until I woke up to no you

I had the dream, last night so clear
Between us, not a thing was wrong
You were there to stop the tears
Falling at the tune of our song

I know I mess up, my dreams tells me too
The thing I don't know is what I can do.

~*Alnilam*~
"The worst tragedy for a poet is to be admired through being misunderstood."

© Copyright 2003 Alnilam - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-07-15 09:25 PM


Well done.  Joyce
wordancer
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2 posted 2003-07-16 11:39 AM


A bit of a heartache here...sadness is, when the pain is there even in our dreams.  (((hugs)))
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