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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-07-12 05:51 PM


Season's Changes

Lovely scenery,
Yet summer is so short.
When summer comes again,
Something stays, something is gone.

Life is like season's changing.
Spring is birth.
Summertime is our youth.
Golden autumn, a time of trial.
Winter is our leisure.

Life  is like season's changing.
Spring is puppy love.
Summertime brings lasting love.
Golden autumn leaves its footprint.
Winter is old couples laugh.

Life is like season' s changing.
Spring is questioning youth.
Summertime is like a rebellious heart.
Golden autumn brings wisdom!
Winter is a time of understanding.

Life is seasons changing.
Spring is a time of innocence.
Summertime feeds ambition.
Golden autumn, our lessons learned.
Winter creates bitter thoughts.

Lovely scenery,
Yet summer is so short.
When summer comes again,
Something stays,  something is gone.

And soon a year has gone by.
And soon a decade passes me by.
Soon,
Everybody I know will be gone.

Accidents like to play jokes on us.
A youth, a baby, a young fellow dies, for no cause,
But for some tragedies, that hands make or fate makes.
But they die for no reason, but it is a reminder.

What's the message in the reminder?
To be careful of our actions and words.
What's the message of lives taken away?
To keep us aware of dangers in the world!

(c)July 12, 2003
Eliza Simmons



Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.


[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (07-12-2003 11:21 PM).]

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2dalimit
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1 posted 2003-07-13 09:37 AM


You've a lot of thought here. And you're right... When summer comes again,
Something stays,  something is gone.


Thanks,
Melton

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2 posted 2003-07-13 11:49 AM


Eliza:  A very thought provoking poem! Good job!

Betty Lou Hebert

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2003-07-13 06:01 PM


I so love philosophical pieces. well done dear lady....

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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