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BrokenWingedAngel
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2003-07-10 08:30 AM



Peeking over the horizon
Faint colors start to show
The sun's bringing a new dawn
Waking us up to say hello

Pale colors turn much richer
Yellows into orange and reds
Alarms start to sound
We stumble from our beds

Now the sun is reaching
Up into the blue sky
Birds start their singing
We rub sleep from our eyes

Bright orb passes the horizon
Dew sparkles on the grass
Coffee starts its brewing
And we saviour that first glass

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

*waves good morning to all and good evening to me*  Have a happy day
BWA


I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

© Copyright 2003 Nicole Lampert - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-07-10 10:33 AM


A well written good start to the day.

(you might want to change savior to savor)
these spelling checks aren't pefect.  Love, Joyce

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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2003-07-10 05:54 PM


Very pleasant to read and sounds like a nice morning!

Betty Lou Hebert

pegasus111
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3 posted 2003-07-12 06:25 PM


I'm so glad you are back after a long absence. I loved this...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



2dalimit
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4 posted 2003-07-13 09:15 AM


Good morning! PIP and coffee.

Thanks,
Melton

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