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abbe
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since 2003-01-20
Posts 131
michigan, usa

0 posted 2003-07-09 12:57 PM


i sit bemused
my addled brain
a mass of tawny gray
watching the days
bump and grind
into each other

losing individuality
turning into a long train
of identical boxcars
speeding bye so rapidly
i can't read the graffiti
that make them unique

Friday came with a burst of zeal
Sunday breaks in birdsong sunshine
Saturday crushed somewhere in between

too quickly my train of days
careens on its way
growing longer and longer
still winding onward
going and going
not yet out of sight



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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2003-07-09 01:33 PM


As long as the train keeps going and I can still see it, I know I'm all right. I enjoyed reading this.
wild irish
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since 2003-07-09
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2 posted 2003-07-09 01:50 PM


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