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missmisery61
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0 posted 2003-07-09 11:30 AM


this road so long and body weak
a twisted journey incomplete
forever winding through my mind
elusive yet i seek to find

that special place that offers peace
to weathered souls seeking release
with pillows soft to rest my head
sweet dreamless sleep all demons dead

how can i look upon this day
sunshine filled no hint of gray
yet eyes that see the chance for rain
a heart despaired so aches with pain

unleash the joy that must exist
for those who dare for those who risk
exposing self to find the way
out of the dark in to the day

So lord I see you grinnin' must be grand always winning....AIC

© Copyright 2003 sherry - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-07-09 11:31 AM


Nice work.  I enjoyed.  Joyce
2dalimit
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2 posted 2003-07-09 12:52 PM


I enjoyed this.

Thanks,
Melton

wild irish
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3 posted 2003-07-09 12:55 PM


well said www.rateapoet.com
missmisery61
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4 posted 2003-07-09 02:16 PM


Joyce  Thank you for reading my post.  Your comments are always welcomed and appreciated.

2dalimit  I see where you read this one and Beyond the Pale as well.  Thank you for taking the time.  I know my style is a bit dark at times, hope it doesn't frighten everyone away! lol.

Wild Irish  Thank you.

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