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TheGoalie
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 47
Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

0 posted 2003-07-05 03:00 AM



      - When Morning comes... -
Holding you so close,
Your breath cold upon my skin.
Dreading the coming day,
When I will leave you again.

When morning comes, you'll be gone,
And I'll wake up alone in my bed.
I will long for my dreams of you,
But our lives go on instead.

I could have stayed forever,
There in the darkness.
I heard you crying soft,
And I gave you a tender caress.

The pleasure I got then,
Just kissing your lips lightly,
Was worth all this pain now,
That now  I'm going through nightly.

Do you think about me
When you're all alone at night?
Do you wake up crying, with
That feeling you just can't fight?

I wish I could hold you
Once more so close to my chest.
And taste your salty lips,
And tell you I miss you, above all the rest.

"Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old.  Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef"  

© Copyright 2003 Joe - All Rights Reserved
junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
1 posted 2003-07-05 03:35 AM


this is so full to the brim with heart break
it made me feel like crying because of its sadness.
hugs from june xxxxxxxx

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-07-05 07:21 PM


Joe~
This has such a poignant longing in it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa
3 posted 2003-07-06 06:39 AM


better to have loved and lost than............

nice touch with this one.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



BrokenWingedAngel
Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60

4 posted 2003-07-07 09:18 PM


Ah... I know this feeling   It's beautiful and well written.  And it's true.. better to have loved and lost... then to have never loved at all.  Doesn't always help at the moment to remember that though.

BWA

I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

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