navwin » Archives » Corner Pub #2 » One moment
Corner Pub #2
Post A Reply Post New Topic One moment Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk

0 posted 2003-07-03 04:40 PM



Take me once more, all of me,
To our dreamlike place of ecstasy
Gather my mind, my body and all
Then send my soul spinning
Like a glass mirror ball
Steal my breath away
Leave lifes skin behind
Melt us together
Sweet indulgence in mind
Every cell will be fizzing
Nerves set aflame
In that moment of pleasure
Just a heartbeat from pain
Nothing exists other than this
In this exraordinary moment
There is only bliss

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
suthern
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
1 posted 2003-07-03 06:04 PM


Steal my breath away
Leave lifes skin behind
Melt us together

This sizzles... and is yet so tender... which does indeed lead to bliss. *S* Great write! *S*

Nightshade
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2003-07-03 10:12 PM


Ooooh, I love this! Well done! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
3 posted 2003-07-04 03:10 AM


thank you so much suthern and chris. i had a little passion there that needed speaking lol.

hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxxx

2dalimit
Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
4 posted 2003-07-04 07:35 PM


I like it. It is more than a "little" passionate.

Thanks,
Melton

junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
5 posted 2003-07-05 03:24 AM


Dear Melton,
thank you for that. it always means a lot to me when someone reads and enjoys my work.

hugs from june xxx

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Corner Pub #2 » One moment

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary