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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Say, Darling ..... ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ Say darling, did you go walking across my memory last night ? And did you find - in gentle repine a teardrop that I'd left behind ? Did you softly caress the remember of smiles before the teardrops came ? Did you wonder at all - in your stroll of recall if I still cry out your name ? Say darling, if you went walking the same streets of my memory Did you shed a tear - for what you left here to keep me company ? For I found a new teardrop crying that I felt belonged to you I caressed it so tender in this moment of remember and held it, to return it to you~ Darling, if you'd like to go walking across a loving-embrace avenue Take my hand, we'll go strolling together picking up the pieces, building anew~ ~Sometimes a memory-from-the-past sneaks up and grabs you and just won't let go~ ~For a very special someone~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-29-2003 08:34 PM).] |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: This has such a wistful quality to it. If only we could go back and pick up fallen pieces of our lives! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Marge... delightful reminisce Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Those memories are sneaky... this one left a beauty with you. *S* |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
oh marge this is just so beautiful. i am glad i popped by. hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Thank you, Marge....once again a poem of yours arrives just when it's needed. This one is priceless. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge my friend, you always seem to come along with the words that I can't find. Thank you for touching my memory bank. Huggles to you ... Marti |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Marge....I simply love this. Touched my heart it did. Going into my library straight away!! hugs, Chris "Said you'd give me light... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
A sweet memory walk, thanks for letting me walk along. |
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TheGoalie Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny |
Perfectly expressed emotions. Sometimes I read something, and wish I could write something like that. This is one of those poems. "Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old. Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef" |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Sounds like a nice walk to me. Thanks, Melton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful thoughts....but in my experience you can't go back...James |
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BrokenWingedAngel Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 60 |
Beautiful... Wouldn't life be grand if we could go back sometimes, to pick up the pieces? Definitely getting added to my library  BWA I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Marge dear. This is beautifully written on a wistful subject. Ihave been really going down memory lane lately. Love, Joyce |
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missmisery61 Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56 |
This really made my heart hurt, in a sweet way if you will. A very beautiful piece. |
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wild irish Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 31 |
AS IF TO BE LOST IN TIME www.rateapoet.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My Poetic Friends~ I SO appreciate each and every one of you~ This piece tugged at my heartstrings until I gave in and let it have voice~ I'm very fond of what it let me say to someone so very special in my life~ It is NEVER TOO LATE to share a piece of your heart with someone who touched your life~ Start today ....~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
This was so sweet, and pretty like a mellow tune...whspered softly by a loving embraced memory. Loved this!!!  SharaRose @-->-- Killing me softly... Thats what the song says. Come bring me to your memory Hold me 'til the teardrop forms and when it does then we'll remember the way it was. And as it fades that's what will be. Leaving me softly.... Til there is a no more. Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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