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TheGoalie
Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 47
Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

0 posted 2003-06-29 04:08 AM


From smiles and happiness
My thoughts turn to anger
And hate.  The face mocking me
In the mirror cannot be mine.
Could I be such a joke to you?
Just another notch for your
Headboard or another disposable
friend?

How do we get from promies made
In the dark with you in my arms
To me walking away in a fit of
Rage?  Tell me please why I hate
That smile upon your pretty face
And that tight lipped sneer upon
mine.  So.

Here I am, alone again.  Listening
To seagulls cry laments my heart
Will not let me feel.  Goodnight.
Goodbye.  I'll see you in my dreams.

"Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old.  Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef"  

© Copyright 2003 Joe - All Rights Reserved
midnightblues
Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2003-06-29 07:56 AM


Dear Joe,

im sure many of us have gone thru this heartbreaking scene in the past... thanks for sharing

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912
Washington State
2 posted 2003-06-29 09:34 AM


Well written misery.  Joyce
kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2003-06-29 06:32 PM


Such a sad poem.. and I have been there and felt the pain..

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

Mad_Hatter
Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
4 posted 2003-06-30 07:51 AM


Very nice poem.  Familiar pain..
junemac
Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
5 posted 2003-06-30 05:13 PM


pain and heart break  spoken so well.

i feel it

hugs june xxxxxxx


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
6 posted 2003-07-02 01:57 AM


I listen to seagulls too
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