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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Push And Shove I'm resting in my moment's lair knowing soon the end will come because I am willing the change of soft to hard and strong, the need within me, pressing me to let go. It's Push and Shove, my newest friends, who extend their fingers reaching out, the crowd of others making way, surprised that I believe in more, a bit selfishly, but the thrust from within finally surrendering to digestion. They started off nudging me, prodding me with thoughts, until I was bruised each day with tomorrow's knowledge. I have plunged into the depths of nowhere only to have them pull me up, dust me off and then boost my ego into knowing what is for the best. They warn me I may crash and burn once in a while, but they will always be there to lift me when down, to quell the negative and to always leave their gentle touch of reminders, that a future awaits my own determination. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
A struggling to be born baby or a poem? How much alike they are. Your poem made me ponder. Joyce |
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SuperDave Junior Member
since 2002-09-12
Posts 48Little House on the Hill |
Know the feeling well, I went through something like this a little over 3 years ago. I do not regret one day. A good thoughtful write. David |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
nahhh, no baby, just me making a dtermination to have a new life as hard as it will be. Thanks Joyce Dave, you can't regret a thing because what we choose to do is and was a part of our make up and regret is a word I rarely use. You did the right thing and the loving one. Hugs to you M |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear fellow poet, i find this piece very thought provoking! and esp. love the last stanza, very comforting! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Michelle, thank you. I have just been having sort of the recognition (finally)of how I want my life to be and making the moves to make it that way. I've already wasted too many months and years believing in the impossible. hugs Maureen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very powerful write M....good to see you in here...let's order another round of drinks, ey? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
only thing is, I rarely drink...but I would enjoy your company just as well. hugs M |
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