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Winter vs Summer [haikus]

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

0 posted 2003-06-21 08:43 AM

Where has Winter gone?
Perhaps to rest a season.
The Old Man gets tired.

Summer has arrived
Have I forgotten the cold
A/C better work

Ladybug
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since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

1 posted 2003-06-21 10:34 AM

Very cute, I love haiku...and it is so fun to write "nontraditional" haiku!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-06-21 01:08 PM

Great fun with words. Joyce

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

3 posted 2003-06-23 03:34 PM

LOL 2da....very clever indeed.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2003-06-23 04:22 PM

hehe this makes me smile

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2003-06-24 09:28 AM

Very Good!

I really enjoy reading a good Haiku.
Well done!

Deb

midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

6 posted 2003-06-24 11:49 AM

I like haikus too, and ur was cute!!!

Love
michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2003-06-24 01:57 PM

Ladybug, Joyce, Peg, Eliza, Deb, midnight...
Thank you all for your comments. I'm trying to start writing again.

Melton

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-07-02 02:24 AM

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

9 posted 2003-07-02 06:13 PM

I like this..I enjoy haiku and like it down in a series as yours was done...

Life is a story waiting to happen..Go on.... Create, Live and Love

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

10 posted 2003-07-08 02:03 PM

Thanks for rading passing shadows.
I'm glad you like haiku series. I like 'em too.

Melton

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