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kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

0 posted 2003-06-17 10:46 PM

Your name is April, and I am in May.
I am so lost without you.
I don't know what to say.
I don't know what to do.

It was heaven when you were with me.
Now, I'm in my own hell.
I can no longer see.
I am no longer myself, I am but a shell.

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

1 posted 2003-06-18 07:43 AM

HellOooOOoo

I really like this! btw welcome to cornerpub ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-06-18 07:48 AM

And this May pass as well - making way for a June summer day...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2003-06-18 11:08 AM

Today's June 21 the first day of summer. I'm sure April is forgotten now. Joyce

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

4 posted 2003-06-18 11:57 AM

Hey Kada, good poem! Stupid question for you, hee hee...when you say the person's name is April and you are in May, are you saying that he/she is in the past and you cannot get back to them since you are now beyond, in May? I may be reading into this too much, sorry...I just read a ton of poems, so my mind is going 100 miles an hour.

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

5 posted 2003-06-18 03:13 PM

precisely, that is the exact meaning of my poem. i am now beyond my ex April because I am in May. thanks again lady

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

6 posted 2003-06-19 12:49 PM

I like your first line...

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

kadafi09
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 143
California, United States

7 posted 2003-06-19 02:26 PM

Thanks.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-06-19 03:39 PM

Really enjoyed this! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Ladybug
Member

since 2003-06-17

Posts 236
Massachusetts

9 posted 2003-06-19 09:30 PM

Hi again! Just wanted to say once again how much I love that line about April and May, that is very clever!

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

10 posted 2003-06-20 05:42 PM

this is lovely.

hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxxxx

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