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TheGoalie
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since 2003-06-15
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Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

0 posted 2003-06-15 03:40 AM


My life is not measured in coffee spoons
Like J. Alfred Prufrock,
But rather by those defining moments of
Infinite sadness that into each life must fall.  
Piecemeal times of joy and unabashed    
Happiness are intertwined within the
Melancholy darkness, and those feelings
Cannot be defined by a utensil that stirs a drink.


© Copyright 2003 Joe - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
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1 posted 2003-06-15 06:09 AM


and those feelings
Cannot be defined by a utensil that stirs a drink


An excellent first post. Will look out for more by you.

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Nan
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2 posted 2003-06-15 08:26 AM


This is a very interesting and introspective piece - It leaves me wondering just what we can count upon for judgment... perhaps a balancing scale of some sort - one side for our successes while the other holds our failures ..?

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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-06-15 09:46 AM







Enjoyed your first post!!

midnightblues
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4 posted 2003-06-15 11:03 AM


Hi Joe,

welcome to passions nice poem

Love
Michelle

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Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2003-06-15 11:21 AM


Indeed this is true.  By bits and pieces.  Joyce
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-06-15 03:20 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very much enjoyed your first post.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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dancing with you in the summer rain~

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind
7 posted 2003-06-15 04:13 PM


interesting...using a coffee spoon as a symbol...cool!

Eliza Simmons
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~Yesterday insult, today gain.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-02 02:32 AM


very clever
missmisery61
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since 2003-07-08
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9 posted 2003-07-08 04:07 PM


The first poem that I read as a new member.  Spontaneous and quite impressive.
wild irish
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since 2003-07-09
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10 posted 2003-07-09 01:44 PM


There's joy, in each step, don't live life to regret. www.rateapoet.com
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