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junemac
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0 posted 2003-06-10 04:32 PM



here is a small poem i wrote recently. hope you like it or find comfort in it. hugs from june xxxxxxxxxxx


I turn to you

My deepest fears i tell to you,
You alone can see me through,
No earthly friend or even kin
Can soothe the pain i have within

Tis you i turn to with panic and grief
With thanks and love and sweet relief
When scared and lonely no answer in sight
Tis you my lord that bringeth my light

My lord please see me and guide my way
Help me to do what is right with this day
Nothing can take this one solid love
For always you'll wait in heaven above

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 2003-06-10 04:37 PM


good write. I wish I have the same faith toward God.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-06-11 09:20 AM


Dear June,

this is very lovely, encouragingly softly ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

idleeyes86
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3 posted 2003-06-12 03:12 PM


I'm always jealous of people who have such beautiful faith. Grrrr I don't like that feeling being fueled by poems like this, only kiddin a really sweet poem.

Everybody hurts, take comfort in your friends, cos everybody hurts sometimes

(r.e.m)

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-06-12 03:40 PM


This is lovely. Whenever I feel the onset of panic or anger, I say a quick prayer and I DO feel better. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-06-14 07:02 PM


Yes you have found the way to comfort and you speak of it so eloquently.  Joyce
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-02 02:33 AM


very comforting

thank you

NewEnglandlazurlu
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7 posted 2003-07-02 08:56 AM


June, I enjoyed reading your prayer and if it's okay, I'd like to print it out to read to my prayer group.

Blessings upon you ... Marti

junemac
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8 posted 2003-07-02 09:59 AM


thank you passing shadows and marti too, i am glad you both enjoyed this one. marti of course you can print it i am honoured that you want to use it.( smiles )

hugs to you both from june xxxxxxxxxxxx

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9 posted 2003-07-02 02:42 PM


June~
This is just beautiful~

'Help me to do what is right with this day'

That is my morning prayer before my feet touch the floor~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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