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idleeyes86
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since 2003-06-09
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0 posted 2003-06-10 02:28 PM


Rock, Paper, Scissors

Unlike the flower
My rock will not die
It will not be broken

It can be wrapped in whatever coating you like
But at the centre it is the same, strong and unmoving
Whatever garment you place upon it

Unlike the chocolate
My paper will not go off
It will not be spoilt

Paint on it, if you will whatever picture you like
Although the paper is blank it has its own beginning
But is there for you to carry on the story

Cut it out if you want
But the story is still there
Even if it’s in pieces

Unlike the kiss
My scissors’ touch will remain
It is not forgotten

Whether it has made you a sculpture or a painful scar
You will remember my touch, as I will remember yours
Blunt me if you will but I will always remain sharp

Unlike the gift
These things mean something


© Copyright 2003 Chris Murphy - All Rights Reserved
junemac
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since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005
uk
1 posted 2003-06-10 04:36 PM


i really enjoyed this unusual poem. i especially like the last part.

more .......... please.

hugs from june x

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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Universal Mind
2 posted 2003-06-10 04:43 PM


It is interesting how you use a childhood game as analogy to life where memories are like pieces, yet it has it beginning, yet they are part of our life. Touch as scissors, so unforgettable, it could be a beautiful cut out of home, or a painful scar on our fingers. Interesting. You think deep.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

midnightblues
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Singapore
3 posted 2003-06-11 09:21 AM


Dear Chris,

i especially like this, a very interesting take on a simple game

Love
Michelle

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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-06-11 09:24 AM


Chris~
Welcome to the Corner Pub~

A refreshingly creative piece~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2003-06-12 09:16 AM


I liked this very much... especially

Whether it has made you a sculpture or a painful scar
You will remember my touch, as I will remember yours

Yes. *S*

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6 posted 2003-06-12 04:45 PM


idleeyes86:  Hope you enjoy your time at Passions!  Nice to see some new people posting. This is an unusual poem and I found it really interesting!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-06-14 07:06 PM


I will have to print your poem and study it awhile to get the full meaning.  Very intriguing.  Joyce
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8 posted 2003-07-02 02:35 AM


I have wondered how to put the rock paper scissors theme into a poem...and now I know

good job

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