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Brenda Hall
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0 posted 2003-06-08 08:09 PM


There comes a time in our life
In good times or while in strife
Our 'checkered past', take it's toll
And needing to search our own soul

The Question needing asked today
What does our heart really say
Do we weep, worry, or do we fret
Was it our best or was it regret

As our heart beats so very fast
We analyze our 'checkered past'
Remembering, we have come far
Yet we wonder, where we are

The Lord weighs our every sin
But don't worry my children
If asked, I will guide thee
Always and through eternity

By: Brenda Hall
"the passionate poet"

[This message has been edited by Brenda Hall (06-08-2003 08:16 PM).]

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aries_luv_ppl
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1 posted 2003-06-08 08:41 PM


I really like this. It make me think.

I guess I haven't tried my best in lots of things. I also know most of the times my parents are right even the answer I hate. I hope I will change before regret hit the door. Thanks for the message.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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2 posted 2003-06-08 09:44 PM


Very good write Brenda - enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-06-09 10:35 AM


Brenda~
Very wise ... nice to see you again~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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midnightblues
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4 posted 2003-06-09 12:33 PM


Dear Brenda,

i esp like the last stanza

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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