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Brenda Hall
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since 2000-05-30
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Texas,USA

0 posted 2003-06-08 07:45 PM


MY DAD

My Dad was a wounderful guy
Very quite, a little bit shy
Gentle from his loving fingertips
To the touch of soft-lined lips

I was my Dad's favorite gal
He was my favorite guy pal
He taught me so many things
He bought me toys and rings

I miss my Dad's softened voice
Although it wasn't my choice
There are days when it is sad
But, God takes care of my Dad

By: Brenda Hall
"the passionate poet"


© Copyright 2003 Brenda Hall - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-06-08 09:48 PM


Lucky you to havde a wondrful Dad.  Mine was a winner too.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-06-09 12:11 PM


Brenda,

u're so lucky, and lovely of u that u're so appreciative ^_^

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
3 posted 2003-06-10 12:37 PM


Brenda:  I have lovely memories of my dad too!  This was very sweet and thanks for sharing.

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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4 posted 2003-06-10 04:46 PM


this is really touching and very sweet. i think your love for your dad is shown very much in this poem.

hugs from june x

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