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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-06-06 10:11 PM


Theory of Shelter (II)

Shelter to a raining day passenger
Is a brief moment of thankfulness.
Shelter to a homeless kid
Is a spring of gratefulness.
Shelter to a dependent woman
Is a comfort zone, a blessing.
Yet the same comfort zone,
Will be gone someday.
Still she is living within her shell,
Unwilling to change,
For changes bring uncomfortable,
Yet changes must be taken places.
One year passed,
Two nearly comes,
When her sources of comfort are gone,
Life would be lowest in tears.

(c)June 6, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
dr tung
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1 posted 2003-06-07 10:51 AM


good read, interesting
midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-06-07 01:32 PM


Wow Eliza,

I like this!

Love
Michelle

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Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-06-07 07:20 PM


Eliza~
You continue to amaze me with your poetic sensitivity~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2003-06-07 07:21 PM


Interesting write this, one to make you think a bit.
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