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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-27 04:03 PM

//hey sorry all, my poems seem to have lots of error recently. This is a revised version of "Yet We Can't Deny". BTW my parents didn't divorce.

I got a question is "When childhood dependent" mean when the person the child rely on is...

Chain of Impact

In yonder childhood, when I was an dependent,
My grandparents left this earth for greater goods,
While my parents was arguing, discussing divorce.
Whom should I come to when I had tears
Of thousand humiliation in school.

Teasing is but a common thing,
Yet it could have long lasting effect.
Teasing is an uneasy for a child.
Not to mention there are thousand who
Receive discrimination in workplace.

And harsh words from parents
Maybe were unintended arrows,
But effect lasts through adulthood.
And maybe solitude isn't a bad thing,
But it gives foreigner a different taste.

Maybe you don't understand,
The illness could change the entire
Entire lifestyle that one was living in.
And who want to be sick,
Yet nature is playing a game with time.

And life isn't about good or bad,
For what one missed could be a gain.
Just like I said before, "Yesterday's Insult, Today's Gain."
Yet we can't deny,
These things have impact on life.

(c)May 27, 2003
Eliza Simmons

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (05-27-2003 06:12 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-05-27 04:13 PM

You are so right Eliza. We should watch very carefully how we speak to our children. Love, Joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (05-27-2003 04:14 PM).]

junemac
Senior Member

since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

2 posted 2003-05-27 04:52 PM

yes you are so right. i like to read your thoughts eliza and they are always so true.
hugs from june x

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

3 posted 2003-05-28 11:50 AM

Dear Eliza,

another insightful piece from u! and u did it so well

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

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