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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-25 02:18 PM

Waterfall

In a secret green,
There lies a waterfall
Among trees and mountains.
Birds fly to its reflection at
The wall of waterfall.
Wanting to know what's behind it,
How far the waterfall will goes
Below the ocean-
What's the fish's boundaries?
What's my boundaries?
Who's my reflection?
Another day in green.

(c)May 25, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-05-25 05:34 PM

So many questions, so few answers. Intriguing. Joyce

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-05-25 10:02 PM

From Pandoras Box

Eliza, I think this is a beautiful
poem. I also think that it's
great that you question
the why and how of
things.

Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Hugs,

Ethel

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-05-25 11:51 PM

Eliza: Waterfalls are so beautiful and fascinating. I can understand that they create questions in your mind. Nice poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-05-26 03:31 AM

wow! i like!

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2003-05-26 11:56 AM

Eliza this is lovely!!!!
And thanks for sharing the lovely image, Ethel

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-05-26 12:44 PM

Eliza~
As I read this one this morning in my e-mail, I thought of the beauty of each waterfall I've seen~

'Birds fly to its reflection at
The wall of waterfall'

And this also reminded me of the multitude of butterflies I've seen gathered at the cool, cool edge of the waterfalls~
One of the most beautiful sights I've seen~

*Side-note:
My son, David proposed to his wife, Kimmie, at the top of a waterfall where they had climbed two years before~
Now isn't THAT romantic ?
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

7 posted 2003-05-26 03:30 PM

Wow, that's such a precious moment for your son and his wife

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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