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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2003-05-25 06:58 AM


Spring showers of dreams
Awakened kiss of raindrops
Bloom of Summers Love.

Blossoms of Spring gowns
A Symphonic Melody
Summers Waltz begins.

Thus Love shall blossom
as lovers embrace the joy
on warm twilights kiss.



A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (05-25-2003 07:09 AM).]

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Munda
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1 posted 2003-05-25 10:34 AM


Ellie, each and every Haiku you write shows your remarkable talent. It's no different this time.
Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2003-05-25 11:09 AM


This Corner has been needing you.  These are lovely, of course.  Love, Joyce
midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-05-25 12:23 PM


Oohh i love it!!!

HugletZ
Michelle

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4 posted 2003-05-25 01:56 PM


Ellie, these are beautiful. I love all
the forms of Japanese verses. There are
probably a lot of them that I have never
heard of, but I like the ones that I have.
Thank you for sharing these.
Hugs,
Ethel

junemac
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5 posted 2003-05-25 06:12 PM


this is very beautiful. i enjoyed this so much.
hugs from june x

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6 posted 2003-05-25 11:57 PM


ellie;  It's been too long since we've had some of your lovely haiku to read. More please!!

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-05-26 03:30 AM


good stuff
Nan
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8 posted 2003-05-26 07:48 AM


Very nice, ellie... I enjoyed...
Marge Tindal
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9 posted 2003-05-26 12:46 PM


Ellie~
Everything you pen is just sooooooooo lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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