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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-24 01:25 AM


Soup from Afar

I saw a falling leave laying on my window.
Uncle Winter must have played me a joke,
Such a cold touch in early spring.
I sat in the hot spring of man-made product,
Slowly move my sponge across my skins.

Now I am thinking,
What about a cup of hot soup
Warming up my veins?
How about a fire camp beside rivers
And counting stars of morning
- with love ones or best friend?

Lifting up my body from the bath,
I dressed myself when I smelled
Something so good it triggered my hunger-
A soup prepared by a friend…afar.

©May 23, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-24 04:52 AM



garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-05-24 06:55 AM


Eliza, I really like this.
Heart Hugs  
Ethel

midnightblues
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3 posted 2003-05-24 12:13 PM


Dear Eliza,

this is beautiful ^_^

Love
Michelle

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4 posted 2003-05-24 01:23 PM


Eliza:  Sounds like soup for the soul!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2003-05-24 01:46 PM


Eliza~
I'd like a big bowl of that friendship soup~

Delightful share sweet gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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