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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-23 07:26 PM


Sunshine Can't Touch

When the wind seems to be intolerable,
Sunshine gives passerby a ting of hope,
That somehow lights will outlast moody cloud.

Yet sunshine is so mild that it seems
Too weak for a match with the wind.
Too weak yet a comfort song... of nature play.

Sunshine can't touch the wind-
The wind that hurts our skin,
And stirs at heart.
Yet sunshine touches the sky-
The air that we breathes,
And keep us fresh.

When the wind seems to be intolerable,
Sunshine gives passerby a ting of hope,
That somehow lights will outlast moody cloud.

Yet sunshine is so mild that it seems
Too weak to dual with the wind.
Too weak yet in the whispering word

Found the missing touch
Of words.

Thousand might have said the words before,
Thousand might have laughed with me before,
Yet how many thousand of them
Are from yours, and only yours... heart.

Thousand of path might have found,
Thousand of truth might have known,
Yet I have chosen yours.
And you? Will you do the same?

(c)May 23, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-05-23 07:55 PM


Very nice, Eliza.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-05-23 09:00 PM




Sunshine is always here, Eliza...always...

and sunshine warms, even in the cold...
we just have to be very clever about how
it comes about!

junemac
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3 posted 2003-05-24 04:39 AM


sunshine is soul lifting. always.

hugs from june x

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4 posted 2003-05-24 04:50 AM


beautiful!
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5 posted 2003-05-24 09:02 AM


Eliza~
This is just beautiful !!!
I greatly enjoy the way your thoughts flow~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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midnightblues
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6 posted 2003-05-24 12:16 PM


Dear Eliza,

i love this, the sequence, ur emotions, everything!

Hugs
Michelle

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7 posted 2003-05-24 01:22 PM


Eliza:  Very interesting chain of thought in this poem.  I enjoyed it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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