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junemac
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0 posted 2003-05-22 06:47 PM



Moods in colour


Heavenly white
Essentially clean
Infinity promise
Purists dream

Glorious red
Assertively bold
Shockingly wicked
Confidence told

Blue melancholy
Cryptically pure
Serenely calm
Emotional lure

Commanding purple
Mystical profound
Richly regal
Magic uncrowned

Gregarious orange
Refreshing alive
Playful engaging
Eternal drive

Yellow amusing
Animated sun
Frivalous naughty
Energy begun

Natural green
Lushly wild
Birthing peace
Soulful child

Black engulfing
Haunting hypnotic
Bleakness absolute
Demanding erotic


© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-05-22 08:25 PM


A lovely poem about the emotions of color.  Joyce
dr tung
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2 posted 2003-05-22 09:10 PM


cool poem bout colors.. enjoyed it

AL

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3 posted 2003-05-22 09:54 PM


Fascinating .... hugs, Marti
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4 posted 2003-05-23 01:07 AM


what a lovely poem

Eliza Simmons
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passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-23 05:16 AM


very cool!
midnightblues
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6 posted 2003-05-23 11:39 AM


Dearest June,

every color was depicted marvelously! I LOVE IT!!!

Love
Michelle

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7 posted 2003-05-23 12:38 PM


June~
I enjoyed this sooooooo much that I couldn't help but get out my box of Crayons !

Moods in colour

Heavenly white
Essentially clean
Infinity promise
Purists dream

Glorious red
Assertively bold
Shockingly wicked
Confidence told

Blue melancholy
Cryptically pure
Serenely calm
Emotional lure

Commanding purple
Mystical profound
Richly regal
Magic uncrowned

Gregarious orange
Refreshing alive
Playful engaging
Eternal drive

Yellow amusing
Animated sun
Frivalous naughty
Energy begun

Natural green
Lushly wild
Birthing peace
Soulful child

Black engulfing
Haunting hypnotic
Bleakness absolute
Demanding erotic


Thanks for the FUN !
This piece is REALLY GOOD !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~



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sea_of_okc
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8 posted 2003-05-23 12:39 PM




An entertaining twist on such a primary (no pun intended) subject.  

junemac
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9 posted 2003-05-23 04:40 PM


oh wow!

i cant believe how many messages. thank you everyone for posting and commenting on this one. i am over the moon to recieve so many positive replies. marge i loved the way you colored my poem. thank you for that it looks amazing now. :0)

you people are THE BEST.

ps, i have just suffered a bout of depression and today you all helped put an extra smile into my day.

xxxx june xxxx  

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10 posted 2003-05-23 05:28 PM


junemac:  You have given me a whole new slant on colors!  Very creative!  I'm so sorry to hear you have been depressed and hope things are looking "rosier" now!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

junemac
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11 posted 2003-05-24 04:41 AM


thanks betty lou for your lovely comments and your get well wishes too.
today i feel like a weight has been lifted again. so i am feeling much better thanks.

hugs from june x

passing shadows
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12 posted 2003-05-25 01:10 AM


wow, glad i came back!
junemac
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13 posted 2003-05-25 02:09 PM


thanks passing shadows.
i am glad you did too,

hugs from june x

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