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dr tung
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0 posted 2003-05-22 07:47 AM


oh this act so easy to do
it takes but a gentle touch from you
but now your voice will more than suffice
to fuel this act of loving you

love of my life how i miss you
i've build you a home in my heart
thou you are far, yet it's close you remain
kindling the passion between us.

and now i await your returning
my wide opened arms anticipating
to give you warmth, a gentle kiss
we breathing the same air again.

© Copyright 2003 alvin tung - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-05-22 10:53 AM


DrTung~

Liked this line bestest of all -

'i've build you a home in my heart'

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-05-22 11:16 AM


Dear Alvin,

this is very sweet, very touching!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

junemac
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3 posted 2003-05-22 03:53 PM


lovely heart warming love poem.
i adored this

oh this act so easy to do
it takes but a gentle touch from you
but now your voice will more than suffice
to fuel this act of loving you

i like your style.
hugs from june x

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4 posted 2003-05-22 08:20 PM


What a nice welcoming home poem.  Joyce
aries_luv_ppl
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5 posted 2003-05-23 01:06 AM


nice

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