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Xeonox
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0 posted 2003-05-22 02:08 AM



I look in the mirror,
Day to day-
I see a boy,
Turning a man someday,

But for now-
My eyes quiver,
As I awake,
To another dreadful day,

I decided today,
Not shave,
To laziness,
I am the ultimate shave,

I am off to work,
Feeling bit refined,
At least I have a job,
If not the best of the kind,

On my way to work,
I see the man,
Sitting by the streetlight,
While missing life’s, green light.

© Copyright 2003 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-05-22 11:04 AM


Xeonox~

I found this to be unique~

'I decided today,
Not shave,
To laziness,
I am the ultimate shave,'


*giggling* at ME ... somedays my legs know this laziness !
And nobody knows it but me !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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midnightblues
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2 posted 2003-05-22 11:17 AM


Dear Xeonox,

i like ur style, its intriguing *_*

Love
Michelle

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Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-05-22 08:18 PM


Nice work.  Youth has the right to be lazy now and again.  Joyce
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4 posted 2003-05-25 01:12 AM


very cool write
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