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dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore 
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Twas such a wonderful person Thee life so much more to expect So young when you were painfully taken back into the arms of our Father in heaven All wept n questioned "why" it happened to one so fine and near perfect when evil people prosper and thrive u asked does God care or is it fair the answer came, much like a revelation humans are so shallow and unaware that much better then this place on Earth awaits us these place called Heaven. Our God knows all His children that is why the good die young to save them form Earth's pain n sorrow To immerse fully in Joy safely in His arms. |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Alvin... ur poem sounds quite pessimistic, yet it seems to be very realistic... nice read ^_^ Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ [This message has been edited by midnightblues (05-21-2003 07:11 AM).] |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
this was a very thoughtful poem. i liked particularly the answer came, much like a revelation humans are so shallow and unaware that much better then this place on Earth awaits us these place called Heaven. it is such a comforting true message. hugs from june x |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
We need to realize that Heaven is a place to be happy about. We still grieve the loss of the person; the everyday interaction, but there is no pain and hurt in heaven. Thankyou for the chance to read. Marilyn |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice read. Eliza Simmons |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write |
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