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Lunar Eclipse Haiku

Yitzy
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since 2003-05-12

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0 posted 2003-05-16 01:55 AM

Lunar Eclipse

It shines over grass
Stalks rustle before it flees
Through obstructing clouds

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-05-16 09:48 AM

Yitzy~
This is just wonderfully full of the imagery of that Eclipsing Copper Moon~

Welcome to the Corner Pub !
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~*Marge*~

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Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-05-16 11:02 AM

A nice remembrance of the eclipse. Unfortunately we couldn't see it here for the clouds. joyce

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (05-16-2003 11:03 AM).]

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-05-16 09:41 PM

Eclipse wanes in red
Returning to full splendor
Enlightening night

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2003-05-17 12:35 PM

Yitzy: Enjoyed this Haiku on the lunar eclipse. We had clouds here and I couldn't see it, but when I went out at about 11:15 p.m. the moon was shining in all her splendor. The eclipse was all over!

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-25 01:20 AM

midnightblues
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Singapore

6 posted 2003-05-25 11:32 AM

Dear Yitzy, i really like this!

Love
Michelle

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