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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-05-15 01:13 PM


Faith is Amazing

Once I said,
I didn't trust your power
To change the me within.
But all had eyes,
Noticed my writing has improved.
And all could hear-
My voice was getting better. Yet,
Yet my heart was still
Lack of faith.

I would want to know
The reason why I don't have faith.
If you were changing me,
Would I be more thankful?
And would I gave my shares
To You, to everyone that was younger,
And to whom needed more than I.
Could I ever be selfless?

Faith makes life amazing.
Life could be the same to them,
But the wiser of which
Would see the lights
And hope in her eyes. Cause,
Cause, faith lives- within.

(c)May 15, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (05-15-2003 01:15 PM).]

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midnightblues
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since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597
Singapore
1 posted 2003-05-15 04:22 PM


Dearest Eliza,

Don't worry, its just a passing phase...

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-05-25 01:20 AM


awesome write
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