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Marilyn
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0 posted 2003-05-13 06:21 PM


Quiet moments of enraptured grace,
A happy smile from woeful face.
Erupted laugh which can't be stilled,
All other thoughts completely filled.

Fevered head in still of night,
A mother's heart so full of fright.
A tired smile come morning's dawn,
Completely now all fear is gone.

Frustrated moments, "Do you hear?"
"Your grounded, though I love you dear."
Proud moments of accomplishment,
When finally he learned to pitch a tent.

Each hair in place, she is a doll,
She's dressed all up as for a ball.
A gleaming smile, a fancy twirl,
Then up a tree goes little girl.

A bloody lip, a broken arm,
A teary face so full of charm.
A torn up knee, ten stitches counted,
A second time that bike is mounted.

Remember days of childhood bliss,
For in my heart each day is stitched.
In timeless love and memory,
Each tear once wiped, each bloodied knee.

The greatest gifts I've ever known,
Are the little ones I call my own.

© Copyright 2003 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-13 08:06 PM


This is a loving mother's tribute to her children.  That was the greatest time of my life when my children were small.They grow up too fast.  Love, Joyce
Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-13 08:40 PM


They are the bestest... indeed - This is a wonderful tribute to motherhood, Marilyn...
Dark Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-13 09:28 PM


A beautiful tribute indeed.

Lovely to read you again Marilyn.

Maree

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4 posted 2003-05-14 08:58 AM


OhMarilyn~
What a joy to see you in the Pub this morning !!!
I've missed ya' gal~

This is one of those 'only a mother would know' pieces that just grabs the heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marilyn
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5 posted 2003-05-14 09:04 AM


Thank you all for your replies. It is good to be back. Inspiration has been hiding for me lately. I am hoping reading here will help the situation.

((hugs)) to all    


Marilyn

Denise
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6 posted 2003-05-14 01:47 PM


Welcome back, Marilyn! It's so good to see you again!

Gotta love those kids...and those memories! Loved your poem!

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-25 01:31 AM


just beautifully touching
ellie LeJeune
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8 posted 2003-05-25 06:05 AM


Hi, Marilyn; so glad to see you here! Lovely poem  and I too so loved it when my 6 were little....I need years of rest though!! Hugs, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Munda
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9 posted 2003-05-25 10:27 AM


I don't know what's more wonderful... your poetry, or to see your name on the blue pages again. Welcome back girl. You've been missed!
midnightblues
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10 posted 2003-05-25 12:22 PM


Dear Marilyn

U've got a lovely heart and lovely trial of thoughts

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

junemac
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11 posted 2003-05-25 03:20 PM


this is lovely. i enjoyed reading such a touching poem. thank you.
hugs from june x

Marilyn
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12 posted 2003-05-31 09:51 AM


Thankyou all for your replies. I am glad this piece was able to touch you.

Munda!! ((hug)) girl. It is good to see you again. I know it has been to long. I have stopped in from time to time to read a little but I have not left my name to be seen much. How are things? We need to catch up.

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