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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2003-05-13 11:02 AM


Lacing up my feelings
So that thoughts are turned down low
I hope you cannot hear me
My mood…. desires it so?

Uplifting smoke from an unspeaking candle
Diffusing haze, pass that slanting halo,
It drips, time is the chandelle,
Which dictates the wax, hour by time.
As the three divides the nine?

Gently by the couch you lay,
All Freudian books, scattered as hay,
Your golden hair does ease the soft
Let time glide by, let thy hours lay.

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

© Copyright 2003 Claire Lucille - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-05-13 02:35 PM


Very poetic.  Joyce
wings of the moon
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2 posted 2003-05-13 04:41 PM


thank you Joyce for your sweet words

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2003-05-14 03:23 PM


pure magic here...I can taste your words...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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4 posted 2003-05-14 03:49 PM


Claire~
It is so refreshing to read the originality of your thoughts~

THIS -

'Uplifting smoke from an unspeaking candle'

SUCH original imagery~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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junemac
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5 posted 2003-05-14 03:56 PM


this is amazing. left me speechless actually. ( well not quite as you can see lol )

great poetry.

hugs from june x

wings of the moon
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6 posted 2003-05-14 04:18 PM


Dear Ceinwyn,
Thank you so much for your kind words...
I can taste them like the magic

love,
claire xxx



"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
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7 posted 2003-05-14 04:19 PM


Dear Marge,

as always, I value your response, your words have really made my day!
Thank you so much...



love,
Claire xxxxxxx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
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8 posted 2003-05-14 04:19 PM


June,
I am touched by your reply...
*warm glow inside

Thank you very much...

Claire xx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

aries_luv_ppl
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9 posted 2003-05-16 12:37 PM


sweet

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

wings of the moon
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10 posted 2003-05-16 07:18 AM


aries : I thank you for your equally sweet words

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

wings of the moon
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11 posted 2003-05-16 07:18 AM


aries : I thank you for your equally sweet words

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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12 posted 2003-05-25 01:32 AM


wow! love this!
wings of the moon
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13 posted 2003-05-25 05:46 AM


thanks passing shadows!
love,
claire xxxxxxxx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

midnightblues
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14 posted 2003-05-25 12:11 PM


Dear Claire,

i love the visions that u paint each and everytime. u do it so wondrously!

HugS
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

wings of the moon
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15 posted 2003-05-25 01:20 PM


aww, thank you Michelle,
I love getting replies from you, you always do it so beautifully

love,
claire x

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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16 posted 2003-05-28 12:07 PM


Hi Claire

So this is where you're hanging out these days

As always, your words flow like water slipping smoothly over polished stone. Bravo, I love the read of this

wings of the moon
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17 posted 2003-05-28 12:13 PM


awww, thank you for your sweet words Rose

:squeeze
love, claire xxx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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