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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-10 04:22 PM


Gardener the Observer

Loving sliently,
Through the night warmth is revealed.
Loving tenderly,
No one can replace your patience-
Your understanding amazes me.

The night is cold as ice
Filling up my robe,
Yet a drop of your soup
Saves my heart from stopping.

Night wind seems to be
Courageous as lion soars,
Yet you wait and await
Your little flower, me,
To grow and away from astray.

And you are understanding-
You did not blame the wind
For blowing in your way.
You did not blame nature
For playing a game of fate.

You silently watch the wind,
Sweeping across the field as your pray.
You patiently remove my defect,
The worms and wounds in me.

Gardener, Guidance,
My light and spring.
You fill me with love...and hopes.
Always there for me,
You are the best.

May you have a
Happy Mother's Day!

(c)May 10, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

© Copyright 2003 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-05-10 05:39 PM


I was hoping this poem was to your mother.  Lovely poem for a lovely lady.  Joyce
junemac
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2 posted 2003-05-10 07:12 PM


wow aries this one is absolutely beautiful.

what wonderful thoughts.

hugs from june x

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-05-10 08:43 PM


Eliza~
Your lovely thoughts continue to delight me~

Have a wonderful evening ... and a better tomorrow~

Give your mom a hug from me and tell her I think she's got a WONDERFUL daughter~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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