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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-05-09 06:54 PM


Spectrum of Light, Hasten to Life.

Regular beats of unheard songs,
Trembling, working,
She bounces her way,
From one end to another,
To create an illusion,
Of space and fantasy
That we see today- desktop.
All there but are- chips and waves
That travel from board to another.

Today we live in
A fantasy world.
The TV that is in the house,
The films that are in cinema,
If the screen are broken one will see,
All there but is a fantasy.
And those story in the films,
All are created by crews and producers,
None is real, all but a fantasy.

Yet this fantasy is eating us up,
Some may have based their situations on films.
Some may spend hours organizing
   their virtual desk on the computer.
Yet some others may have gained
Knowledge and useful tools as aids in life.
Yet how many others are lost
In the spectrum of technologies.

They are
Spectrum of light, hasten to life.
They are like various rays
That could be harmful,
Yet could be helpful.
They speed
The world up yet men are
By no mean having enough sleep.

In this spectrum of light,
I am lost in finding my light-
The correct mirror of life.
In this specturm of light,
I am addicted to its fantasy-
E-mail me my dinner.

Technologies are
Spectrum of light, hasten to life.
They are like various pen
That is shaping my thoughts.
They are like various pen
That is shaping my body-
I am a poem, a drawing by technologies.

They are
Spectrum of light, hasten to life.
They are like various rays
That could be harmful,
Yet could be helpful.
They speed
The world up yet men are
By no mean having enough sleep.

(Zoon) [Time to wake up, it's the morning.]

(c)May 9, 2003
Eliza Simmons

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-05-09 08:59 PM


Very clever and well reasoned poetry.  Very nice Aries.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-05-09 10:23 PM


Dear Eliza;  This is very different in subject matter and an interesting treatment of it.  Good job!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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