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wings of the moon
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0 posted 2003-05-06 11:40 AM


You know the feeling I’d describe
Melting kisses on the ground,
the relief to spring the old,
Meaningful tears and hurtful souls

I cannot put my finger on it,
always the feeling does evade.

Just trying to capture the island,
but the waves bid me away.


"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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1 posted 2003-05-06 04:20 PM


WingsOfTheMoon~

'You know the feeling I’d describe
Melting kisses on the ground'


I found this thought just deliciously done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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wings of the moon
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2 posted 2003-05-06 05:16 PM


aww thanks marge for your comments

love,
Claire

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3 posted 2003-05-06 09:45 PM


Thoughts, feelings and words can be so evasive.  But you caught them.  Love, Joyce
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4 posted 2003-05-06 10:17 PM


This is luscious!!
I enjoyed the read, thank you!
Luv, Liz xxx

"Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~

wings of the moon
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5 posted 2003-05-07 05:45 AM


Aww thank you Joyce, your words are very sweet

love,
Claire xx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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6 posted 2003-05-07 05:45 AM


Thank you ESP for reading and sharing

Claire xx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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7 posted 2003-05-09 02:06 PM


like the way you said this
wings of the moon
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8 posted 2003-05-09 02:42 PM


passing shadows,
thank you for your sweet words...

love,
claire xx

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

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