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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-05 08:38 PM



Why

I wandered into your room,
the walls closing in on me,
your artistry breathtaking...
why

So soft and sweet
I've never seen, the before
put away, so much there
hidden from me...
why

I read
a tear trickles down
wondering why
it couldn't be
for me.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-05-05 09:57 PM


Plaintive and sweet.  Joyce
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-05-06 10:13 AM


AhWynterGal~
So nice to see you in this little Corner of our 'home'~

Sad this is~
Don't be~ ...
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-05-06 10:31 AM


Thank you Joyce...

Marge, I think I am going to do a little experimenting and move around a bit.

I was tempted to stop writing for awhile, there isn't much going on in my life right now. And I feel like I am beating up on myself so I am even beginning to post in prose...and I need to just organize my thoughts and write out what's inside me.

I am frozen in time, and am not sure what it will take to change that.

Hugs for always being there.
M

junemac
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4 posted 2003-05-06 10:45 AM


oh how sad, and how beautifully written.

just want to send you big hugs !!!!!!

june xxxxx

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